Flowing like a river - through,
Following the nature's curve,
A thought seeps in, silent and
Stealthily, not asserting his presence
I am made to realize he is there -
By way of thinking - just thinking
And the deceiving suitor, leaves me
In bewilderment - and I think!
thoughtful verse
ReplyDeleteThank you! Just scribbled a few lines, the instant thoughts that came.
DeleteSuitors, enchanted suitors, to be able to show their presence, yet remain far away, far away, yet in thought and in deed, they are but as far away pandeshwar as the thought is to your next breath
ReplyDeleteDexter mahan, why do I find your comment cryptic! Hmmm... perhaps I need more time to know what you mean (w.r.t. your comment, I meant). But I do agree on "thought is to your next breath" phrase. :)
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Thank you Anonymous! I shall give it a look! :)
DeleteVery nice.. but I think u can continue it for telling whole story
ReplyDeleteThank you Manoj & I shall try telling a tale! :)
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