In the grip of time, with the notion of speed,
I am bewildered!
As the world under control of gravity,
Yet rotating and revolving on its own terms.
Life gives us opportunities,
Only to make us face more hurdles.
But the same life shows no pity on us,
When we surrender.
Leave alone the concept of humanity,
We’re left with no option but to betray.
Those who survive the blues without causing chaos,
Stay as the epitome in my list of great humans!
Some how your blog makes struck for words. Its really nice. To me poetry is one form of expression, one need not worry for the scale or rhythm as long as it conveys the message with beauty, as usual the poetry made my morning
ReplyDeleteHaha... That is really very sweet of you Sir and I do agree with prioritizing the expressions over following poetic pattern. And when the meaning is conveyed effectively in a flow, then a meaningful line is no less than a verse!
DeleteHappy Monday Sir!